Audrick's Thesis

Thesis
Audricka Pashaya Herdian
Period 6

1. Raul's Article: https://english12.forumotion.com/t214-hitler-found-in-indonesia

Thesis: Hitler found in Indonesia
Claim/Argument: It states that Hitler was found in Indonesia. He flew there, live there, married there, and died there.
Evidence/Reasoning: There is a lot of evidence and reasoning supporting the argument here. One of them is how it's rational that Hitler left Germany to hide from the consequences of his action. The writer also states what Hitler do in Indonesia, and how he dies too.
Comment: It's a good article. It has rational values, and many evidence to support the argument.

2. Seno's Article: https://english12.forumotion.com/t205-audience-beliefs-values-needs-writing-raihan-seno-athallah

Thesis: Bigfoot is the missing link in human evolution.
Claim/Argument: Scientists have been interested in Bigfoot due to the holes in Darwin's evolution theory.
Evidence/Reasoning: Scientists have found a piece of hair that is linked to bigfoot, and they are currently still trying to find bigfoot.
Comment: Bigfoot is a well-known myth on the west. Most of the myths of Bigfoot doesn't tell how it existed. This is a good example of telling how something exist.

3. Derrel's Article: https://english12.forumotion.com/t204-audience-beliefs-values-needs-writing-derrel-12i

Thesis: An Indonesian man, Budi Budiman, can communicate with Satan.
Claim/Argument: Satan specifically told him to not reveal anything about their conversations, or else he will take everything that is dear to Budi.
Evidence: The man dreamt of Satan once, which led him to be able to communicate regularly with him.
Comment: This article is very short and concise, which I think is good for the kind of audience it is targeting, as it also provides barely any evidence to support the claims. The content of the article is just right for the type of people who read these kinds of articles.