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Fri Sep 20, 2019 9:06 am
The Effect of Censorship

By Ridzky Ramadan Anwar

Although some claim that the school filters are there to protect children’s innocence, they instead limit the children’s ability to grow and learn, sheltering them from issues that are deemed too unfavourable or offensive by the school.  One problem is that as soon as school bans a website, other parents began to demand to ban another website, eventually leaving only a few websites left for students, as it can be seen in book-banning cases. Several filters also blocks legitimate educational website, as proven by Bikini Atoll, a nuclear test site, is banned by school.This means that the school filter has already gone too far.  Websites such as National Organization for Women are also often banned by filters, due to delving in controversial topics, which limits student’s potential to learn.To present those evidences,  a cause and effect method, because it describes the cause being the filter and the effect being children ability to grow is restricted due to websites being censored.

Bonus Fallacies:
“Snowball effect” uses a slippery slope fallacy.
“Filters block bikini atoll” uses anecdotal evidence fallacy

Sources:
“Censorship In Schools And The Effects On Our Children.” Everyday Health, 2017, https://www.everydayhealth.com/kids-health/censorship-schools-effects-on-our-children/.
Wagner, Mitch. “How Internet Censorship Harms Schools .” Computerworld, 26 Mar. 2010, https://www.computerworld.com/article/2468073/how-internet-censorship-harms-schools.html.
Anderson, Melinda D. “How Internet Filtering Hurts Kids.” The Atlantic, 26 Apr. 2016, https://www.theatlantic.com/education/archive/2016/04/internet-filtering-hurts-kids/479907/.
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Fri Sep 20, 2019 10:50 am
Well done.  I'd put the sources in brackets so it's clear you've used three (I believe you had foot notes on the original document you were working on?) Which method of development would be best for presenting this argument/pieces of evidence?
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