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Etymology and Cognate Poems
Mon Sep 02, 2019 4:12 pm
Etymology and Cognate Poems
Devandra Indra
12H
Indonesia - Indonesia is from the word from Greek nesos. Formerly called Indian Archipelago or East Indies Islands. ‘’the East Indies,’’1850, from Indo- ‘’India’’
Bird - the origin. Nobody knows. Unknown. All the words are the same in french, latin, India and Greek.
Zeus - supreme god of the ancient Greeks and master of the others, 1706, from Greek, from PIE *dewos-"god" (source also of Latin deus "god," Old Persian daiva- "demon, evil god,"
Courage can give a power
No fear to shows
No hesitation
It’s all can help you face your problems
There is a balance between patients and anger
There is human
Daring
Loving
And protecting
This poem that I make I use the root word zeus, zeus root word is a deity. The meaning of my poem is about a human that trying hard to train themselves to have a courage. They must face what they most fear if they want to be a good person. Because there is a balance between patients and anger, sometimes we need them and sometimes we also need one of them to solve our problem and every fear that we faced. ‘’Courage can give a power’’ means that if we want to solve and faced our problems, a courage could help us face our fears. ‘’There is human’’ means that emotions that makes us angry and patients defined our characters of how it define our destiny. ‘’Daring, loving and protecting’’ means that we have been given a gift from a god that we have something that we can maintain to protect and care ourselves and friends from something that harm ourselves and the people who were closed with us.
Devandra Indra
12H
Indonesia - Indonesia is from the word from Greek nesos. Formerly called Indian Archipelago or East Indies Islands. ‘’the East Indies,’’1850, from Indo- ‘’India’’
Bird - the origin. Nobody knows. Unknown. All the words are the same in french, latin, India and Greek.
Zeus - supreme god of the ancient Greeks and master of the others, 1706, from Greek, from PIE *dewos-"god" (source also of Latin deus "god," Old Persian daiva- "demon, evil god,"
Courage can give a power
No fear to shows
No hesitation
It’s all can help you face your problems
There is a balance between patients and anger
There is human
Daring
Loving
And protecting
This poem that I make I use the root word zeus, zeus root word is a deity. The meaning of my poem is about a human that trying hard to train themselves to have a courage. They must face what they most fear if they want to be a good person. Because there is a balance between patients and anger, sometimes we need them and sometimes we also need one of them to solve our problem and every fear that we faced. ‘’Courage can give a power’’ means that if we want to solve and faced our problems, a courage could help us face our fears. ‘’There is human’’ means that emotions that makes us angry and patients defined our characters of how it define our destiny. ‘’Daring, loving and protecting’’ means that we have been given a gift from a god that we have something that we can maintain to protect and care ourselves and friends from something that harm ourselves and the people who were closed with us.
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Re: Etymology and Cognate Poems
Wed Sep 04, 2019 3:13 pm
Task fulfilled. Some grammar issues. Formatting could be tidied up so it doesn't look like a rush job.
Just pasting your work into Microsoft Word could have identified that you didn't put punctuation at the end of the first and third definitions, and Zeus is a proper noun so it gets a capital Z.
You misread the information on "bird", the words are not the same in other Germanic languages is what it said; bird is oiseau is French (which is not a Germanic language anyway), and it Greek it's πουλί , which transliterates as pouli (and is also not a Germanic language)...
Just pasting your work into Microsoft Word could have identified that you didn't put punctuation at the end of the first and third definitions, and Zeus is a proper noun so it gets a capital Z.
You misread the information on "bird", the words are not the same in other Germanic languages is what it said; bird is oiseau is French (which is not a Germanic language anyway), and it Greek it's πουλί , which transliterates as pouli (and is also not a Germanic language)...
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