- Athalla Raspati
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Etymology and Cognate poems (Athalla 12H)
Fri Aug 30, 2019 4:06 pm
English: the people of England, call English “the speech of England” a noun uses of old English, back then English used to be called Angul because they were inhabited on the Jutland coast.
Zeus: meaning the supreme god in the ancient greeks and master or father to the other gods in greeks, back in Greek gods used to be dewos, and Zeus’s nickname used to be “dyeu to shine” but in derivates, it's now “sky, heaven, god”.
Bird: a feathered, warm-blooded vertebrate animal, in old English its used to be called bridd and with other Germanic languages it’s called brood or breed, but bridd in the c. 1400 used to declare other things like, bees, fish, snaked and human children.
The ones above
Heaven above
God’s above
Deity’s above
Please calm down
And please give me the crown
I want to find love
And fly like dove’s
This poem I make uses the root word God, God root word is deity, the meaning of my poem Is very simple, its when a man has hit rock bottom and he has no other choice but to pray to God, he ask God to help him by coming down from heaven and going down to help him, “give me the crown” means the man is asking for wealth, luxury and many other things to be classified to be rich. “I want to find love” means that the man believes if you have money, you will get a wife/girlfriend and the man wants someone he could spend his entire life with. “fly live dove’s” means that he wants to be like a God and don’t care about anything and just relax, fly like superman.
Zeus: meaning the supreme god in the ancient greeks and master or father to the other gods in greeks, back in Greek gods used to be dewos, and Zeus’s nickname used to be “dyeu to shine” but in derivates, it's now “sky, heaven, god”.
Bird: a feathered, warm-blooded vertebrate animal, in old English its used to be called bridd and with other Germanic languages it’s called brood or breed, but bridd in the c. 1400 used to declare other things like, bees, fish, snaked and human children.
The ones above
Heaven above
God’s above
Deity’s above
Please calm down
And please give me the crown
I want to find love
And fly like dove’s
This poem I make uses the root word God, God root word is deity, the meaning of my poem Is very simple, its when a man has hit rock bottom and he has no other choice but to pray to God, he ask God to help him by coming down from heaven and going down to help him, “give me the crown” means the man is asking for wealth, luxury and many other things to be classified to be rich. “I want to find love” means that the man believes if you have money, you will get a wife/girlfriend and the man wants someone he could spend his entire life with. “fly live dove’s” means that he wants to be like a God and don’t care about anything and just relax, fly like superman.
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Re: Etymology and Cognate poems (Athalla 12H)
Wed Sep 04, 2019 3:53 pm
Seems you've got the basic gist of the task under control. Some attention to detail or proof-reading would benefit the submission; for example:
Because? If there is a because relationship between those clauses, what is it?the people of England, call English “the speech of England” a noun uses of old English, back then English used to be called Angul because they were inhabited on the Jutland coast.
This is greatly run-on.This poem I make uses the root word God, God root word is deity, the meaning of my poem Is very simple, its when a man has hit rock bottom and he has no other choice but to pray to God, he ask God to help him by coming down from heaven and going down to help him, “give me the crown” means the man is asking for wealth, luxury and many other things to be classified to be rich
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