etymology and cognate poem raras

etymology and cognate poem
Raras

below I attach the link to my etymology and cognate poem assignment. thank you

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W69u_AWgj42065QMnDqeZ4TBS5oshuHugArgRPRNPGg/edit?usp=sharing

One of the better efforts I've seen while looking through the submissions.

You can improve the appearance of your work, which counts for much, by giving attention to some details: for example the number 1706 appears in the explanation of the word Zeus, but why? You forgot the capital at the beginning of the last sentence of the first explanation. Or, this is a massively run on sentence:

This poem mainly focuses on how Zeus (root word) has a mortal twin or someone on earth that has a similar personality as him, which shows that elaborated in the first verse, explaining how Zeus is mighty and he is the number one goddess in heaven above, with all the mightiness he doesn’t encounter love in his deep, goddess heart. continuing to the second verse, elaborating about a relationship where the other is similar like Zeus in love.

A proof reading before submitting would probably catch these things.