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Audi- Posts : 28
Join date : 2019-08-06
STAR
Fri Dec 13, 2019 3:47 pm
"A REGRET": By Pradia, Feedback: By Audi Ivory
I like the story, because the story didn’t make feel bored. The story is very realistic, it shows a student moving abroad for education, AKA university. The student is having a hard time in university abroad, and thinking of returning to Indonesia. The author’s purpose is to aware people that it is not easy to adapt for education in a different country. I agree with the author even though I haven’t experienced it. The deeper meaning could be depression. I do think there are some grammar errors.
I like the story, because the story didn’t make feel bored. The story is very realistic, it shows a student moving abroad for education, AKA university. The student is having a hard time in university abroad, and thinking of returning to Indonesia. The author’s purpose is to aware people that it is not easy to adapt for education in a different country. I agree with the author even though I haven’t experienced it. The deeper meaning could be depression. I do think there are some grammar errors.
Mr. StocktonAdmin- Posts : 1156
Join date : 2019-08-01
Re: STAR
Mon Dec 16, 2019 10:19 am
Minimal response.
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