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Audience: Beliefs, values, & needs - Writing (Gusaimas M.H.H.A)

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Thu Sep 05, 2019 1:43 pm
Dear Mr. Richard,

The following link attached leads to my assignment.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/10aOTuI0LDjUJf8ujg7ehjQIX7uDWqPAIjOT9YllnS-8/edit?usp=sharing

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Ago Himawan
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Mon Sep 09, 2019 2:40 pm
Looks fine.

Stylistically, you used the phrase "in addition" three times; that interferes with the flow, vary the phraseology.
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