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Etimology Poem Faiz Syach
Tue Sep 03, 2019 12:38 pm
Bird : Unknown origin
Zeus : Meaning "shine" or "sky". In Greek mythology he was the highest of the gods. After he and his siblings defeated the Titans
Indonesia : Indo “india” + Greek Nesos “Island”
If you see with innocent eyes, everything is divine.
Tuesday Night the moon shines bright
The skies are blue, the journey is long
like the 7 sins of hell
the dives are full of greed
the lust is dark the pride is high
the glutton eats right
the sloth sleep through the night
and the envy are getting embodied
the skies turns black, the journey is still long
Zeus : Meaning "shine" or "sky". In Greek mythology he was the highest of the gods. After he and his siblings defeated the Titans
Indonesia : Indo “india” + Greek Nesos “Island”
If you see with innocent eyes, everything is divine.
Tuesday Night the moon shines bright
The skies are blue, the journey is long
like the 7 sins of hell
the dives are full of greed
the lust is dark the pride is high
the glutton eats right
the sloth sleep through the night
and the envy are getting embodied
the skies turns black, the journey is still long
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Re: Etimology Poem Faiz Syach
Wed Sep 04, 2019 2:40 pm
Seems to have been done hurriedly? 100 word analysis of the theme and meaning of your poem looks to be lacking too.
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