Atlantis DNA Article Analysis - Juna (12 F)

Summary of the Article
There have been thoughts that Atlantis existed. Some do believe but some also don't. It's awesome to be able to see an underwater castle hidden beneath the ocean of the real world, but it is all just a myth used for children's fantasy. But scientists has discovered that some people are descendent from Atlantians. It is impossible to know whether one person or another was born from an underwater ancestor, but there are beliefs that those people are related and connected to the mythological gods of the sea. Scientists have done several research by testing on several people around the world and the result is either and up or down evidence that has been proved.

Strength/Weakness of their Claims
From what I've read so far, it remains unknown that the claimed came from many different sources and other researches that has been made in the past. It's also questionable that the people with this type of DNA may have hidden around us, that some came from different places around the world.

Beliefs, Values, and Needs
To describe this article, it is an information unlike any other regular researches. To me, this article proves that there are existence  of Atlantian people and its descendant. Science has gone fiction in the world of entertainment, but in reality this brings fiction into a new level. What me and the audience would get from this article is that it shows researches and evidence about the existence of Atlantis and its people. What makes it an evidence are the research, showing information about several people from across the world with these types of DNA's and how they are so connected and relate-able to the Atlantis mythology. Although it takes a few scientific knowledge to understand this article, but what matters are the sources and the information all dedicating to Atlantis itself. If some people are descendant from Atlantis, then they have the ability of a god where they can breath underwater and summon watery powers, those are just my thoughts but also something the scientists has never thought of before but would be cool to figure that out, or maybe just never thought that existed in their DNA's when doing a research. If people are descendant form mighty gods, then mythology existed in the real world. If descendants of Atlantis secretly exist in the world, then Atlantis may have existed after all but never discovered by anyone yet.

Your analysis seems solid. Your writing is a bit awkward, maybe because you're trying to write in an overly formal style? It's easy to speak and have a conversation with you, so consider just writing pretty much as you would speak.