Fixing Grades Term 1 - Karen

Karen Yahya
Advisory K / 12
AP English

Applying University or Apply for Job Applications

Some students have been contemplating between going to college or start job applications immediately. There have been different arguments on which would be better opportunities.

Beforehand, let’s talk about the advantages of entering university. Entering one, would help gain qualifications that are recognized and respected worldwide. Identifying that having these qualifications would help a lot when in expanding one’s knowledge and skills before entering the professional world. Along with that, with a graduate certificate a few would be paid and offered a higher salary. These would help in financial stability especially when you have loans and grow up independently without parent support. Some university has given students different chances for undergraduate hob opportunities, this would help a lot in future job applications (CV and application letter).

According to the bureau of Labor Statistics in April 2018, university graduate experience only 2.1% unemployment rate, compared to high school graduates with 4.3%. Entering university would help gain networks and connection all over the world, from your fellow classmates, workmate and even internships. These would also help in increasing or widening friendships. For those who are still researching and evaluating different majors and hob applications, most university would help a lot in general electives. You would widen or even shorten the tasks and profession that you want to apply to. Along with widening understanding and tasks you would help in time management and adapting to new environments, since you would experience this a lot when growing up.

University has different courses and requirements to graduate, one of them are presentation and researching skills, this would help a lot in preparing overall communication skill that would be very beneficial in workplace.

I upped the outcome "Able to produce compositions that introduce a thesis supported with appropriate evidence..." to HP, and moved the letter grade up by one. The piece you have submitted has good form and use of evidence but has some grammar issues bearing on "Able to demonstrate mastery of standard written English..." outcome.