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Re: Happiness
Thu Nov 28, 2019 1:51 pm
That's extensive. There's a bit of awkwardness and unnaturalness with the language; the best you can do about that is probably reading over the whole piece carefully. A little points like "moslem" needs a capital M, and gonna ought to read "going to" can be caught with a spell-checker.
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