Rhetorical Choices - Alma

The easiest thing your could do that would make a significant difference to your essay's excellence would be to break it into about 5 paragraphs: one for the introduction where your thesis is, right after the hook sentence, then a few, ideally 3 paragraphs, one for each of your man points, and lastly a conclusion. Why? The English essay writing tradition has been based on the "5-paragraph essay" for centuries, plus, paragraphs help to make it clear to the reader how your main ideas are organized.