Test Prep: Rhetorical Choices - Kayla Sabina

Looks like you clearly understand the purpose of the rhetorical analysis essay.  

-If something were to be said by way of critique or improvement, you might explain a little bit about why Rosenberg was misquoted and the difference of meaning between the abridged quote and the full quotation.  

-Another thought would be to avoid putting the same word too close to itself, it causes an awkwardness or poetic-ness that isn't needed in academic writing: "...of his points lay in pointing out the mistakes..."

-Aim at maintaining full formality of register in academic writing, so "Williams also added in Zimbabwe “elephants are perceived as animals of power..." would become "Williams also added that in Zimbabwe,  “elephants are perceived as animals of power..."