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Diajeng Dwiputri Arini- Posts : 11
Join date : 2019-08-12
discussion thesis in depth Ajeng, Mika, Audrick, Rafi
Thu Sep 12, 2019 2:15 pm
MIKA
he think the thesis statement is in the 3rd to last paragraph.
Audrick
He thinks that the thesis statement states that the male role in the mid century has a different role from the previous one.
Rafi
he think the strongest thesis statement is today, men are more and more conscious of maleness not as a fact but as a problem.
Ajeng
I think the thesis statement is same like mika said 3rd to last paragraph.
2.
mika 2 because its open its setting up an argument, thats the main point and the fact.
audrick 2 because its much more descriptive than the first one and it explains a lot more opposing to the first one
rafi 2 because same as mika its open up a discussion it can be argue
ajeng 2 because thats the fact and can be argue
3.
mika 1 because its arguable
audrick 1 Unlike the second one, the first one explains more in-depth on the aspects of description and the main point. The second one only state the proposition and not an explanation.
rafi 1 because the second one its not even a thesis the second one is a suggestion
ajeng 1 because its arguable and the second one is a suggestion
4.
mika 2 because the other it feels right
audrick 2 because sometimes thesis statements needs to have a jargon in which the thesis statement want to express taught and particular professions.
rafi 1 because its suppose to be a statement.
ajeng 2 because i think jargon thesis statement need to have perspective from people
5.
mika correct because thesis is to set and to put.
audrick True, the etymology of thesis is to place, which explains that thesis is used for pointing out something.
rafi correct because the word came from greek
ajeng correct because when i search google it came from greek and the meaning is just the same.
6.
mika
audrick True, people should use the word "these" or words that describes the objects that are more than one.
rafi
ajeng true because thesis is just a thesis that explain a lot of things.
7.
mika
audrick The second one, it shows more explanation and in-depth reasoning, hence it is stronger
rafi
ajeng
he think the thesis statement is in the 3rd to last paragraph.
Audrick
He thinks that the thesis statement states that the male role in the mid century has a different role from the previous one.
Rafi
he think the strongest thesis statement is today, men are more and more conscious of maleness not as a fact but as a problem.
Ajeng
I think the thesis statement is same like mika said 3rd to last paragraph.
2.
mika 2 because its open its setting up an argument, thats the main point and the fact.
audrick 2 because its much more descriptive than the first one and it explains a lot more opposing to the first one
rafi 2 because same as mika its open up a discussion it can be argue
ajeng 2 because thats the fact and can be argue
3.
mika 1 because its arguable
audrick 1 Unlike the second one, the first one explains more in-depth on the aspects of description and the main point. The second one only state the proposition and not an explanation.
rafi 1 because the second one its not even a thesis the second one is a suggestion
ajeng 1 because its arguable and the second one is a suggestion
4.
mika 2 because the other it feels right
audrick 2 because sometimes thesis statements needs to have a jargon in which the thesis statement want to express taught and particular professions.
rafi 1 because its suppose to be a statement.
ajeng 2 because i think jargon thesis statement need to have perspective from people
5.
mika correct because thesis is to set and to put.
audrick True, the etymology of thesis is to place, which explains that thesis is used for pointing out something.
rafi correct because the word came from greek
ajeng correct because when i search google it came from greek and the meaning is just the same.
6.
mika
audrick True, people should use the word "these" or words that describes the objects that are more than one.
rafi
ajeng true because thesis is just a thesis that explain a lot of things.
7.
mika
audrick The second one, it shows more explanation and in-depth reasoning, hence it is stronger
rafi
ajeng
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