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THESIS STATEMENT - Alma, Astrid, Cynthia, Dhira, Samsara

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Thu Sep 12, 2019 8:16 am
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THESIS STATEMENT - Alma, Astrid, Cynthia, Dhira, Samsara Empty Re: THESIS STATEMENT - Alma, Astrid, Cynthia, Dhira, Samsara

Thu Sep 12, 2019 8:42 am
Just fine. "dhira" in the last line needs a capital. The second line in Alma's section looks weird because it's justified to both margins... Small details of grammar and formatting influence how our writing is judged and can usually be solved easily by a quick proof-reading.
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