Audience: Beliefs, values, & needs - Kayla Sabina

Audience: Beliefs, Values, & Needs

Kayla Sabina

Article chosen: ancient humans interbred with angels

2. The text theorizes that humans carry the DNA of Fallen Angels. This can be proved by the fact that humans carry the HLA family of genes. The origins of this gene can be traced back to Neanderthals and Denisovans which are Nephilims, the offspring of Fallen Angels. It is theorized that humans interbred with Nephilims in Europe. The genetic evidence of interbreeding are mostly found in Asia and Europe. Neanderthal and Denisovan remains are also mostly found across Europe and Asia.

3. The claim Neanderthals and Denivosans are Nephilims. This claim can further support the article’s main argument but the writer did not cite nor support this claim with evidence. This renders the claim useless to the main argument. Another claim the writer made is that ancient humans interbred with Neanderthals and Denisovans. This claim is supported by evidence from researchers and scientists however the writer does not cite most of the evidence which makes the evidence useless and leaves the claim unsupported.

4. The audience of this article are most likely people who are very religious. These people are most likely from a religious upbringing and educational background. These people seem to be those who believe in conspiracy theories. These people seem to be those who are from countries with a large population of Christians. This is the target audience because the writer aims to convince their readers to believe in the main argument of the article. The main argument heavily supports the Bible and is trying to prove that what is said in the Bible is factual. For people to believe in this, the writer targets a very religious Christian audience because this audience would have the background that would make it more likely for them to believe in the argument that the writer is trying to make.

Easy to read and well organized.

My only constructive feedback on such a nicely written submission is you've used "most" and "mostly" five times, it sort of sticks out and interferes with the rhythm of the text, might want to vary your diction to avoid that.